Angel of Death

Hey JC! I'm not going to go into line by line critiques, I'll just give you my overall impressions, so sorry if this is long but... One of my favorite ...

Note: The Second attempt at poetry, rip it apart and enjoy! Thanks for reading. And the Lights Go Out On Broadway By Angel of Death The room started spinning and ...

Hey Jiggy! No, he corrected himself, this is far worse. I think the is should be was. Dark streets crowded him, streetlights glaring with disapproval. Don't like the way this ...

Yes, I'll have to agree with Jiggy. There should be a third option because if the story is written well and follows but needs help, I'll be glad to read ...

Hey there, Ky! Already, he's realized he will die out here, in the shrubgrass and the dirt that's hard and dusty and stubborn. So he prays. He prays through his ...

W00t go Jiggy! *throws confetti* ~Angel

Hey Sarah! Thanks for reviewing The Jane Effect , and no, it is not going to be discontinued. I just want to experiment with a different beginning in the story, ...

Hey there! Okay, first off, I liked the title as I just adore the French language. Secondly, I've been critiquing poetry all week and I'm kinda getting the hang of ...

WarriorOfTheBrimstone: Thanks for your review! I was worried about it not sounding right but I'm glad you can hear it in your head without problems. Yeah, I get emotional every ...

Hey Jiggs! Darkness swept down on silent moth wings. He was covered in blood and gore, a match for the mess before him. Even his weary, ancient eyes turned away ...

Note: Again, this is another piece that was inspirational piece that I wrote. I really like it because of what I was thinking about at the time and I love ...

Hey Ky! Gee, you haven't wrote lyrics before and you're good at it :wink: I really really liked this. The story is great and unique because no one truly knows ...

Hello! “I am sure that will meet your requirements, Miss Lincombe,” said Maccabi, breaking Anne of in her musings. “Now, if you’ll excuse me. It’s already late, and I have ...

Hey Dreamer! This was really cute. I like how your MC was having a dream and then her dog ruined everything. But one thing that concerns me is, that these ...

Hey there Andy! I quite enjoyed this. You write really well and I think that your MC is well developed in this first chapter. You know, before I go on ...